About This Service

Transform Your Solid Script into a Greenlit Project — Partner with a WGA Professional

You have pushed your script as far as possible on your own. The next step is to enlist a veteran WGA screenwriter—not to assume control, but to elevate your work to its highest potential. Consider me your temporary collaborator, your script consultant, or a dedicated coach for your creative endeavor.

My Services

• Review & Assessment: For $100, I will read your screenplay, pilot, treatment, or manuscript and provide industry-standard notes—superior to any coverage service you have encountered.
• Enhancement & Refinement: For a fair, negotiated rate, I will optimize your structure, condense excessive scene description, sharpen dialogue, smooth transitions, and deepen your characters—all while preserving your unique voice.
• Proofreading & Guidance: Spelling errors corrected. Grammar polished. Clarity enhanced. Market readiness significantly increased.

Your Benefits

• A script that is vastly improved, yet remains entirely your own.
• No requirement for credit (unless you wish to offer it).
• Expedited service available when needed.
• Candid, expert feedback from a professional with over two decades of experience as a paid writer, senior analyst, producer, guest lecturer, and script doctor.

Why Choose Me?

Collaborative writing teams are standard in Hollywood because they produce results. I have assisted numerous screenwriters, producers, agents, and complete beginners in discovering the most compelling version of their narrative. You are not engaging a mystic with abstract suggestions. You are hiring a seasoned practitioner who delivers concrete work.

Television or film. Comedy or drama. Science fiction, memoir, biopic, or unconventional genre fusion—I have experience across all formats.

Furthermore, I am skilled in the judicious application of AI tools when appropriate. I utilize them discreetly to explore alternative dialogue, improve structure, or accelerate brainstorming—always under my supervision and subject to your creative direction. It is simply another method I employ to help you progress more efficiently and achieve a more powerful final product.

I am willing to sign a non-disclosure agreement upon request. I do not require a credit. My sole objective is to assist you in preparing your script to make a strong impression on representatives, buyers, and key decision-makers.

Contact Information

Call or text: 323-236-8129

Alternatively, you can message me here. We can connect by phone, email, or arrange an in-person meeting anywhere in Los Angeles.

Let us advance your project to the next stage and move it closer to an approval.

I am ready to begin.